Talk:692R-2008-Book-Bookmarks

Feedback - You have good information. The only question that I have about what you have written so far is why did you choose to separate the examples list from the tool names list? As a reader, I think that I'd want all of that information in one place. However, that could just be my personal preference.

Thoughts on your bookmarks chapter (Lyndell)
I liked your "try this" section because it reminded me of things I had forgotten and also gave me some new ideas. One caution you might want to share is, because sometimes Web sites are taken down, if there is critical information you absolutely don't want to lose, copy and store the data in some other place or form. Also, when sites are taken down, some less-than-desirable people may obtain the rights to the URL and use the good reputation of the site to post their bad content. Therefore, people do have to be a little careful in returning to Web sites they have book marked.

A couple of pet peeves I have is using the word "utlize" when "use" works just a well. Also, I believe that there are a few commas missing (not that I'm a good example of an editor) but adding a comma after "With services like delicious," and "As Web page tracking evolved," would add clarity. Where you have the bulleted list you might want to consider using the the phrase, ". . . allows you to:" and then you can start each bullet with "build," "tag," "share," and "see others" which keeps the bulleted items parallel.