Talk:692R-2008-Book-Video

Brad: I am ready for any help or suggestion!

Feedback -- overall I think it's an informative article. I do have some comments on changes that you may want to consider: (1) Do we really want to tell people the "go ahead" if they want to bible bash video-style? I know that you are trying to make the point that the Spirit is the best teacher and that contention should be avoided, but I'm concerned that your words may be misinterpreted. (2) At some point, you say something along the lines of "all" of us have been spiritually moved by video. Last semester, I taught a blind student and I don't know that she would agree with that statement. You may want to consider saying "most" of us in order to appeal to be a little more inclusive.